We had to write a poem all about ourselves
On the first line we wrote about our appearance
Then on the second line we had to write about our personality
On the third line we wrote about the things we do
Then on the last line we just added some extra
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I do really like it Vivienne! Your DLO is very eye-catching and the words you have selected describe you perfectly. My favourite line is the 'Talented, creative, clever me' one. Which line did you find the easiest to write about yourself? Which line did you find the hardest?
ReplyDeleteAll of them were easy to write
DeleteHello Vivienne, My name is Kqwizan and I am a year 8 student, and I go to Panmure Bridge school. I love this DLO you have made about yourself, I love the color's in the back.
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