Kia ora, I am a student at Belfast School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share and Grow.
Monday, July 5, 2021
Pink Poem
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Kia ora Vivienne,
ReplyDeleteWhat a wonderful poem you have written. It made me think of all the things you wrote pink sounds, smells and tastes like. In fact, I now really feel like eating some cotton candy.
Thank you for sharing it with us all.
Keep up the great learning and blogging,
:) Sharon - Te Ara Tūhura Education Programme Leader