Today we learnt about onomatopeia , this is my buzzy buzzy bee poem i wrote
I hope u like it:)
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Hi Vivienne
ReplyDeleteI liked this because one of my favorite animals from nature is bee's. This reminded me that there is more than one type of bee in earth. Maybe next time you can add a bit more information or description about what you did and other stuff like that. How come you decided to do your poem about a bee?
-Taliyah