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Wednesday, August 25, 2021

Signs of spring

Today I did some schoolwork during lockdown and I wrote a poem about spring because spring is about to come.I searched poems on google so my brain can get a little head start because I  had no idea how to do a spring poem so when I looked at the ones on google the words started to pop up in my head so this is the poem I wrote and I hope you like it.


 

2 comments:

  1. Hi Vivienne, What a lovely spring poem. It brought lots of nice images into my head - like lambs and birds. It's great that you researched other poems to get ideas for your own poem. Did you find any ones that you really liked?
    - Mrs Hobbs

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  2. Great work Vivienne, I really enjoyed reading your Signs of Spring poem. I liked your choice for the three colours fading into each other in the background, depicting spring arising from the ice and cold of the winter season.
    It is inspiring that you searched on google beforehand about wring poems. This shows your willingness to find assistance of where to start, and in doing so you were able to create this great poem.
    I'm excited to watch your blog grow and see what other activities you choose to post about.

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