Kia ora, I am a student at Belfast School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share and Grow.
Wednesday, August 25, 2021
Signs of spring
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Hi Vivienne, What a lovely spring poem. It brought lots of nice images into my head - like lambs and birds. It's great that you researched other poems to get ideas for your own poem. Did you find any ones that you really liked?
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Great work Vivienne, I really enjoyed reading your Signs of Spring poem. I liked your choice for the three colours fading into each other in the background, depicting spring arising from the ice and cold of the winter season.
ReplyDeleteIt is inspiring that you searched on google beforehand about wring poems. This shows your willingness to find assistance of where to start, and in doing so you were able to create this great poem.
I'm excited to watch your blog grow and see what other activities you choose to post about.