Today I this challenge we had to do it so our teacher gave us a sentence and we had to finish it the first sentence was_ dropped his/her bag and ran as fast as he/she could. This is my one:)
Thursday, December 2, 2021
2 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Subscribe to:
Post Comments (Atom)
Hey Vivienne, this is a good story. I did the same thing with my class, I wrote a 100 word story too. Maybe you could have said that Emma got her bag and then realised that her bag was empty so that means someone saw her bag and took everything that was inside it and put it on the bench. You could have ended the story by that Emma found out her bag was empty and she was shocked. Your story could have ended right there.
ReplyDeleteBe sure to check out my blog here:
https://nwscharmyp.blogspot.com/
Hi Vivienne, thanks for replying and okay!
Delete